[Adium-devl] Adium 1.0 press release

[Evan Schoenberg]

On Jan 31, 2007, at 11:22 PM, Phil Dokas wrote:

> On Jan 31, 2007, at 11:18 PM, Evan Schoenberg wrote:
>
>> Adium 1.0 includes service-specific improvements such as AIM file
>> transfer and Direct Connect image transfer improvements, Yahoo
>> invisible status, receiving of MSN custom emoticons, and Google
>> Talk buddy icons and typing indication support are a few other
>> notable additions.
>
> This sentence needs to be cleaned up a bit, there's two main verbs in
> the sentence, "includes" and "are".  I'd just drop the "are a few
> other notable additions" from the end of the sentence.

Oops, thanks, Phil.  I made some changes on one half without reading  
the thing through afterwards. Fixed.

-Evan
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