[Adium-devl] Adium 1.0 press release

[Phil Dokas]

On Jan 31, 2007, at 11:18 PM, Evan Schoenberg wrote:

> Adium 1.0 includes service-specific improvements such as AIM file  
> transfer and Direct Connect image transfer improvements, Yahoo  
> invisible status, receiving of MSN custom emoticons, and Google  
> Talk buddy icons and typing indication support are a few other  
> notable additions.

This sentence needs to be cleaned up a bit, there's two main verbs in  
the sentence, "includes" and "are".  I'd just drop the "are a few  
other notable additions" from the end of the sentence.

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