www/adium.im 486:051f9946a202: Removed unnecessary and inappropr...

[commits at adium.im]

details:	http://hg.adium.im/www/adium.im/rev/051f9946a202
revision:	486:051f9946a202
branch:		adiumx.com
author:		Peter Hosey <hg at boredzo.org>
date:		Mon Jan 02 10:11:52 2012 -0800

Removed unnecessary and inappropriate apostrophe.
Subject: www/adium.im 487:4df7011e0e10: Changed “.dmg package”, of which there is no such thing, to “disk image”.

details:	http://hg.adium.im/www/adium.im/rev/4df7011e0e10
revision:	487:4df7011e0e10
branch:		adiumx.com
author:		Peter Hosey <hg at boredzo.org>
date:		Mon Jan 02 10:12:46 2012 -0800

Changed “.dmg package”, of which there is no such thing, to “disk image”.
Subject: www/adium.im 488:abf9e8bd6ee2: Removed superfluous “of”.

details:	http://hg.adium.im/www/adium.im/rev/abf9e8bd6ee2
revision:	488:abf9e8bd6ee2
branch:		adiumx.com
author:		Peter Hosey <hg at boredzo.org>
date:		Mon Jan 02 10:13:45 2012 -0800

Removed superfluous “of”.

diffs (30 lines):

diff -r d2350ff2ee5c -r abf9e8bd6ee2 screencasts/index.php
--- a/screencasts/index.php	Mon Dec 19 17:40:24 2011 -0500
+++ b/screencasts/index.php	Mon Jan 02 10:13:45 2012 -0800
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 			'revver_id' => "159316",
 			'title' => "Installing Adium",
 			'permalink_name' => 'installing-adium',
-			'description' => "How to copy Adium from its .dmg package into your Applications folder."
+			'description' => "How to copy Adium from its disk image into your Applications folder."
 		),
 		array(
 			'revver_id' => "159319",
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 			'revver_id' => "159320",
 			'title' => "Adding a contact; first chat",
 			'permalink_name' => 'adding-contacts',
-			'description' => "Adding of contacts to your list and initiating chats with them."
+			'description' => "Adding contacts to your list and initiating chats with them."
 		),
 		array(
 			'revver_id' => "159405",
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@
 								<div id="pagetitle"> <h3><a href="../help/"> <img src="../help/gfx/AdiumIcon.png" alt="Adium Icon" height="32" width="32" border="0" />Adium Help</a> > <a href="../help/pgs/AdiumDocumentation.html">Adium Documentation</a> ></h3> 
 									<h1>Adium Videos</h1> 
 								</div>
-					<p>Here you can watch some video's that should get you started with Adium in no time.</p>
+					<p>Here you can watch some videos that should get you started with Adium in no time.</p>
 					<div id="videoHolder">
 						<div id="video"><img src="previews/qtime.png" alt="Quicktime Logo" /></div>
 						<div id="episodeInfo"><p><a id="episodeLink" href="">The video will appear above once you select one to watch.</a></p></div>